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Taranir Zetsumei
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Posts: 3
Joined: 06.12.06
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| ^^; Not that great of a picture, and I know I suck at realism.. and painting... but critiques and comments are still loved! Please rate/comment? |
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Seet Shiying
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Posts: 22
Joined: 13.10.06
 | | Posted on 11-12-2006 04:06 | |
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| it's lovely! the flow of the hair, texture of the clouds and the eyes. not bad at all (: |
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Alex Holt
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Posts: 77
Joined: 04.12.06
 | | Posted on 12-12-2006 21:28 | |
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| I have to agree, composition wise its very good, and you have a nice style with a touch of abstraction - the only thing that strikes me in the way of a critique is that you could tidy up the end up the nose a bit, it would only need a little shadow to do so. But very well done! |
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William Bulmer
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Posts: 25
Joined: 12.12.06
 | | Posted on 12-12-2006 23:23 | |
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| That's actually pretty good. I agree with the last person. The nose does need to be more well defined. Other than that, good use of color, shading and texture. You're much better than I was when i was 12. |
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Taranir Zetsumei
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Posts: 3
Joined: 06.12.06
| | Posted on 12-12-2006 23:47 | |
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| Okay, thank you! ^^; Yeah, I really need to improve my realistic noses... I do anime art most of the time, so I never really get much practice doing realism. Thank you for the critique! I'll try to work on that. |
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Angeli
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Posts: 129
Joined: 05.12.06
 | | Posted on 19-12-2006 05:52 | |
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You know, it's really hard to believe you're 12. You're very very tallented. I commented on your pic already. I love the colors you used. It's a really nice scene! BTW - your girl reminds me a little of Bjork  Maybe it's just me, though  |
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Amelia Guo
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Posts: 14
Joined: 30.11.06
 | | Posted on 19-12-2006 13:35 | |
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| Awesome color! It looks very nice! |
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