| Autor | Advice? Criticisms? |
Grant Mackay
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Ingreso: 28.11.06
 | | Posted on 07-12-2006 12:11 | |
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| I would like my picture to be as good as possible, so I'm open to advice and any criticisms that you have. Thanks. |
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| Autor | RE: Advice? Criticisms? |
Alex Holt
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Ingreso: 04.12.06
 | | Posted on 07-12-2006 12:30 | |
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Its a nice concept, you've got a really nice pattern for the sun, the colours are wonderful!.
If I was doing it at this point here, I'd add loads of intricate detail to the tree - it works really well as a silhoette, so make it more complex by adding more branches. I'd also make the horizon less regular, it adds a natural feel to it. Other than that - add more detail and texture by working into it with really soft brushes of varying colour.
The only thing that you might want to work on from a technical stance is the river(?) you've started to do a single point perspective, but the river isnt quite the right shape for it, it should probably be tiny at the horizon and broader at the base (possibly an upside down V shape even). If it is a river you might want to add tiny flecks of colours from the sun and sky, to give it a reflection and make it more watery.
Editado por Alex Holt en 07-12-2006 12:31 |
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| Autor | RE: Advice? Criticisms? |
Grant Mackay
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Ingreso: 28.11.06
| | Posted on 07-12-2006 16:52 | |
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| Wow, thanks, I didn't expect a lengthy comment as that. I certainly wasn't going for a naturalistic point of view, but of something more abstract. As I mentioned in my picture, I was listening to the new Red Sparowes album, which is definitely abstract in it's own way. |
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